It is critically important to know that youth are one of the pillars of society. Personally, I believe that young people provide a lot of their time for improving and helping their community. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, young people provide their services to the community by establishing many associations and institutions which aim to help people by providing jobs, dorms, and food for anyone who needs help. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. In the last year, my friend has established an institution for helping anyone who cannot find a job in our country or presenting financial aids for families in need. As a result, a lot of young and old people found jobs and so many families got financial assistance to help them , especially during Ramadan. Therefore, he asked me to come with him to provide this help for our community instead of doing nothing for enhancing the community, so I accepted his invitation, and now I am working with him without any salary or financial return, but I am feeling glad and proud because I am introducing a pretty work to my country. If I had known about this work in the past, I would have helped more people.
Furthermore, youth can provide their help using websites on the internet by creating pages or channels that aim to make a smile on poor persons. For instance, there is a person who presents a program on YouTube, his name is Ghaith, and this man introduces his help to people who do not have a house or have financial debt without showing his face to the viewers and by changing his voice. As a result, a lot of people have solved their problems and have changed their life through his program. In addition, this man is considered a role model for each young person, and they are trying to make things like him in the Middle East.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that youth are doing as much as they can to help their community. This is because young people establish associations to provide good deeds, and they are using the internet to make people happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople found jobs and so many families got financial assistance to help them , espe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s got financial assistance to help them , especially during Ramadan. Therefore, h...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to use' or 'use'.
Suggestion: to use; use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66219839142 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65220290965 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520107238606 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0539002066 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196320601444 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725856425932 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562623603132 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138473814252 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237356253919 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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