Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities have a major effect on each student knowledge. For this reason universities' curriculum should be set with lots of care. I believe that each curriculum should be based on students ' need and their field of study, and it is no need for all the students to take courses like history, if their field of studies have nothing with it. I will support my opinion by giving two reasons in the following.
To begin with, many students need to get good grades, so they will fully focus on their field of studies to get good scores and master in their majors, however, it may be hard for them to get good grades in history because they may not be familiar with it. If universities make taking history courses a requirement, it will hurt many of students' grades because they may not be good at history. For example, I remember that when my cousin was an undergraduate student, she was required to take a history course even though her major did not have anything to do with history. She was a top student but that semester her grades was not as good as before because she was not good at history and that history class hurt her grades.
In addition, not all students like history, so it may be a burden on their shoulders to have a history course. For this reason they may not pay attention to their history courses and may not be active during the classes. This will make the professors unmotivated too since most of the students will take history courses because they are forced. If both the students and the professors going to be unmotivated, the outcome of the classes will not be good, and history courses will be only a waste of time.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h curriculum should be based on students need and their field of study, and it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51677852349 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43884712855 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439597315436 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7985597431 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302703512016 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132824979088 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590098205923 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233606300231 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581937639653 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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