Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.
Serval method are used by educator to designed the curriculum, to fete out student desideratum good approach, it boons student to get more engage in curriculum. Nonetheless, to subsume what
curriculum of accourding to student desideratum is positive thinking, including it to curriculum and offer them would be abysmal, uncanny and vacuous- since student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are in not interest of their filed that leads to augmentation of their thinking and knowledge in untoward conditions.
However, it conjecture to feted out student interest is progressive thinking. since, student are facing legion conundrum while studying their respective course. if area of interest is included in their course, it makes them more possionated to engage in study. For instance, ram is doesn't want to only study about theory of physics, also want study practically experiment how it applicable in football, want calculate the momentum and projectile football, when one players shot the ball. consequently, he will more focused to study if all his area of interest is included in the course.
Nonetheless, if areas interested of student is included in course material, then what about to thrive in untoward conditions. As of result of this, they will never try to study what are not in their comfortable zone. That is ram yadav is interest in maths and it application in several field, that make his immure in that area , he never explore other field like geography, music, arts - which is cardinal to comprehensive development of student. Hence, he will timid to explore the field which are not realm of his interest.
Therefore, student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are in not interest of their filed that leads to augmentation of their thinking and knowledge in untoward conditions. Even though, to include is student area of interest into subject matter is rational thinking, its overall effect are still uncanny.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-27 | topeibisanmi@gmail.com | 66 | view |
| 2023-10-27 | topeibisanmi@gmail.com | 66 | view |
| 2023-10-27 | topeibisanmi@gmail.com | 66 | view |
| 2023-10-27 | topeibisanmi@gmail.com | 66 | view |
| 2023-10-27 | topeibisanmi@gmail.com | 66 | view |
- formal education tend to restrain our mind and spirit rather than free it 66
- There is now evidence that the relaxed pace of life in small towns promotes better health and greater longevity than does the hectic pace of life in big cities Businesses in the small town of Leeville report fewer days of sick leave taken by individual wo 57
- Claim It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero Reason The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished 50
- Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them 50
- Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership Write a response in which you discuss the extent to wh 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...curriculum. Nonetheless, to subsume what curriculum of accourding to student desi...
^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ideratum is positive thinking, including it to curriculum and offer them would be...
^^
Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'pull'
Suggestion: pull
...nd vacuous- since student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s- since student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are in no...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and knowledge in untoward conditions. However, it conjecture to feted out stud...
^^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'conjectures'?
Suggestion: conjectures
...n untoward conditions. However, it conjecture to feted out student interest is progre...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...udent interest is progressive thinking. since, student are facing legion conundrum wh...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...udent interest is progressive thinking. since, student are facing legion conundrum wh...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...while studying their respective course. if area of interest is included in their c...
^^
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o engage in study. For instance, ram is doesnt want to only study about theory of phys...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...otball, when one players shot the ball. consequently, he will more focused to study if all h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 239, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
... comfortable zone. That is ram yadav is interest in maths and it application in several ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 279, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'several fields'.
Suggestion: several fields
...interest in maths and it application in several field, that make his immure in that area , he...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...field, that make his immure in that area , he never explore other field like geogr...
^^
Line 6, column 339, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'explores'.
Suggestion: explores
...make his immure in that area , he never explore other field like geography, music, arts...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'pull'
Suggestion: pull
...t. Therefore, student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erefore, student should always pulled in their uncomfortable zone which are in no...
^^
Line 8, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l thinking, its overall effect are still uncanny.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89483358749 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9319966253 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282265777309 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974554577559 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750927468637 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165027564683 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064000182319 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.