TPO 23, Integrated
The passage mainly explains that population of yellow cedar trees have been declining and offers three reasons for it. The lecture, however, introduces some evidences that undermine such claim.
First, the article claims that the yellow cedar decline may due to insect parasites attack are called cedar bark beetle. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that healthy yellow cedar is more resistance than other trees since yellow cedar's leaves have powerful chemical matter, which is poisenous for insects. Therefore, cedar bark beetle attack to other trees instead of yellow cedar.
Second, the declining in yellow cedar population may caused by brown bear. This animal claws bark and eat it as diet owing to high sugar content, as the author claims, is repudiated by the lecturer. He mentions that although brown bear hurts to yellow cedar, this animal are not able to over declining. In addition to, yellow cedar population trees have been declining in some places, which brown bear never live in there.
Third, the reading points that gradual changes of climate and temperature hurt to surface roots grwoning system. It causes, sometimes, trees growth in cold season and roots encounter with freez temperature. In contrast, the speaking says that changing in temperature have been effecting on other tress. In a manner, some of tress growth in high level changes, while they never encounter with declining population.
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explains that population of yellow cedar trees have been declining
explains that the population of yellow cedar trees has been declining
due to insect parasites attack are called cedar bark beetle.
due to insect parasites attack which are called cedar bark beetle.
due to insect parasites attack called cedar bark beetle.
is more resistance than other trees
is more resistant than other trees
cedar bark beetle attack to other trees
cedar bark beetles attack other trees
may caused by brown bear
may be caused by brown bears
this animal are not able to
this animal is not able to
In addition to, yellow cedar population trees have been declining in some places, which brown bear never live in there.
In addition, yellow cedar population trees have been declining in some places, where brown bear never live in there.
the reading points that gradual changes of climate and temperature hurt to surface roots grwoning system.
the reading points out that the gradual changes of climate and temperature hurt the surface roots growing system.
Sentence: The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that healthy yellow cedar is more resistance than other trees since yellow cedar's leaves have powerful chemical matter, which is poisenous for insects.
Error: poisenous Suggestion: poisonous
Sentence: Third, the reading points that gradual changes of climate and temperature hurt to surface roots grwoning system.
Error: grwoning Suggestion: growing
Sentence: It causes, sometimes, trees growth in cold season and roots encounter with freez temperature.
Error: freez Suggestion: free
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 230 250
No. of Characters: 1171 1200
No. of Different Words: 130 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.091 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.262 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.483 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.628 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4