The graph shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line gives comparisons to the amount of three kinds of spreads consumed in the course of 16 years, starting from 1981.
Overall, it is clearly demonstrated that butter and margarine consumption witnessed a downward trend while the opposite pattern was evident in low fat & reduced spreads.
At the start of the period, butter was the most popular spread with approximately 140grams, roughly 1.5 times higher than the amount of margarine. In the first 5 years, the figure for butter increased significantly to reach the peak of 160 grams, whereas a stark contrast was seen in that of margarine with the decline of nearly 20 grams Subsequently, the use of butter dramatically dwindled throughout the remaining period to hit the unprecedented low point of 50 grams. In addition, margarine consumption surpassed that of butter from 1991 to 1001, followed by a sharp reduction to reach the bottom position of 40 grams in the end.
Regarding low fat & reduced spreads, its consumption only started in 1996 at 10 grams. This figure, which accelerated by 800% 5 years later to take the first rank in the remaining period, finally experienced a gradual fall to over 70 grams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rine with the decline of nearly 20 grams Subsequently, the use of butter dramatic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06153846154 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8773622616 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9183196921 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122053261784 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626163319686 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059008843912 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827342914775 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588505609262 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.