Throughout history, people tend to help each other in times of need through various ways such as giving each other clothes and food, or lending money. While some people believe that contemporary humans do not help each other as they used to, others, however, stand at the other side of the continuum, asserting that people now are significantly more generous. As for my opinion, I subscribe to the latter idea. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into two of my most prominent reasons for advocating this viewpoint.
First and fore most, with the emergence of modern technology and the ever-increasing pace of its improvement, people gained access to more complex and sophisticated tools for production. As a result, people can produce goods easier and more convenient, and have access to a plethora of products and food. Therefore, they are more willing to give other individuals part of their posessions. In contrast, long time ago, people did not even had enough food for themselves to eat, and most people were significantly poor. Thanks to technology, global economy has considerably improved and people have a more gratifying life. An example can drive this notion home. When I was a kid, my grandfather used to tell me that when he was young, they had to fully dedicate their time and effort on their farm just be able to merely satisfy their basic needs.
Furthermore, another equally compelling reason for corroborating my stance lies in the fact that contemporary humans are notably more cultured and educated. Nowadays the majority of people have access to education and great books, and they are more inclined toward studying. Consequently, they have a sense of sympathy and compassion for other individuals in their society, and they try their best to save them from their misery. People are now cognizent of the fact the impoverished people are not responsible for their situation, and their society and social class is the culprit of such adversity. Current society glorifies forgiveness and helping the poor, and individuls, especially intelectuals, do what they can to be honored for such action. Contemporary ideologies do not value wealth or fame, instead they value equality and justice. On the other hand, people in the past did not have access to any book or teacher, even if they did, it was not a well-developed education system. In fact, as the records show, in the last sixty years, people's level of education has been doubled.
To put it all in a nutshell, having all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I significantly believe that contemporary human being are considerably more generous, on the ground that they obtain more food and goods, as well as they are more educated and open-minded.
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- TPO 45 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and ex 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ast, long time ago, people did not even had enough food for themselves to eat, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06387665198 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87337904357 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4329633586 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.95 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382540777758 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113870186528 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538386339922 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229189839402 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530410283865 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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