Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today's world, the rapid changes and uncertainty about the future make situations that can cause people to get confused about their future. A controversial question often raised regarding this issue is whether people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more amiable, whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is common. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted and has more than a dimension. In the recent world where everyone has their own issues and worries about their future, it is hard to be happy and satisfied with their life. They battle in their own story to get more features that ensure them they will not have a problem in their lives.
To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is prices rose dramatically in recent years and it makes hard situation for people to afford their life. They have to work hard and do more than a shift to get more money. These circumstances make them more worried and nervous about the quality of their work or about their retirement time. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. As since I complete my master's education, I joint a big company with work in IT. I soon learned that I had to work hard because we classified our work performance and if we can satisfy the customer it had a great bounce. I worked hard, and consequence I felt depressed and tense.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that the new technologies that invented recently are more distributed rather than mirthful. We create them for our satisfaction, but sometimes they are noisier, which causes an unpleasable situation.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this statement that people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92128279883 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6840467828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545189504373 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1247898933 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287135880575 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878729026057 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123316929966 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161379485223 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152278056428 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.