From past few years , journalism has been the topic of concern with numerous arguments for and against. Some people state that public press has flooded their minds with bleak emotions while others contradict this statement and find it useful. As fas as I am concerned to this issue , I am on the same wavelength with former people.
To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that all the broadcasts now have become commerical as all the renowned news channels are owned by big identities and run by them as well. The result is sold channels only telecast their success stories and contributions to the world. Besides , press fails to cover intrinsic and current happenings all around the world and ends up producing fake and useless news such as Bollywood celebrities breakthroughs or serial stories. In this way , journalism is generating unawareness in people because either news are futile or repetitive ones.
Moreover , the have inclined people's minds towards unrealistic lifestyles. For instance, rather than any knowledgeable issue , they often brag about model's luxurious lifestyles. As a result, youngsters hail to mediocre families get intrigued and start imitating them. Therefore , this cause disputes among them when children demands don't meet their expectations. These are the reasons why young generation is more into imaginary world because their minds are not fed with the real life problem.
To recapitulate , according to above proceeding discussion , I am highly bent towards the notion that news media need to brush up their sources and bone up on to bring those issues which need utmost attention . So we can all stand in solidarity and fight against it rather than living in the world full of fantasies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16428571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78895990915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.916602588 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146028400698 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445021949809 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471432531969 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767806769855 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178951860854 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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