The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 1017

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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 1017

The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to particular Caribbean island during the span of 7-year -period, from 2010 to 2017.
In general, it is clear that the total number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island always increased during the whole period. Additionally, the figure for visitors staying figure for on cruise ships lower than that for those choosing stay on island during most of the time
Concerning the line graph, in 2010, the total quantify of tourists traveling Caribbean island stood at exactly 1 million, with 75.000 of them choosed for staying on cruise ship and the rest decided staying on island. Over the next 2 years, while there was a minimal drop to reach the lowest point, from 0,5 millions to 0,2 millions of visitor choose staying on the cruise ship, staying on island still more popular with 1,25 million visitors.
The final year, the Caribbean reached its peak at 35 millions in the total number of visitors.The visitors decided on cruise ship experienced a sharp grew to 2 millions, the opposite was true for the number of tourists who staying on island reduce significant, just 1,5 millions visitors

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...he lowest point, from 0,5 millions to 0,2 millions of visitor choose staying on the cruise sh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stay'.
Suggestion: to stay
...lions to 0,2 millions of visitor choose staying on the cruise ship, staying on island s...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...illions in the total number of visitors.The visitors decided on cruise ship experie...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99479166667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48615414981 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7627985303 43.030603864 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.8 112.824112599 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176405710171 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118564535605 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578235688788 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123049813419 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256004587573 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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