In recent decades , There has been considerable debate regarding the roles and ...of sports. I firmly concur with the opinion of promoting such activities among people to foster healthy living . However, some people state that there are numerous practices can be adopted to sustain fit. As far as i am concerned to this issue , I reckon that both opinions have their own place and people should sue all sort of methods that help them maintaining their health.
To kick off , it is no exaggeration to say that international sports are quite popular among all walks of people. As people look up to them as their ideals and imitate their day-to-day healthy lifestyles to be the spitting image of them. In this way, players have been influencing the youth and inculcating the sense of active living. To illustrate this real life example can be taken , cricket is one of the most admirable sport in India and children, youngsters and adults spare sometime from their busy schedule to be on cricket grounds. Thus , by following their passion , they continue to stay perfectly fine.
On the latter opinion , people have highlighted that one should indulge in active routines rather than global sports because an individual cannot always pick time for these sports but can remain active throughout the day. Moreover, some activities such as stairs climbing, skipping, are all involved in our daily lifestyle and one need not to go out of the way to find large grounds to exercise them. However , sports are good means to stay fit but cannot practice it everyday as it entails equipments like if someone is really into football , he needs a football and a big space while we do exercises for example cardio or aerobics, it can be done just with physical efforts. Therefore , there are myriad ways which we can adopt to stay healthy at no extra hours and cost.
To recapitulate, according to above preceding discussion , I am highly inclined to my notion and weighed both the sides equally. Eventually , in my viewpoint we must include all activities in our normal life and considerate sports as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i reckon, sort of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91501416431 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61548487769 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623229461756 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6173903398 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190726627153 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604575322299 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592619666509 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114628145043 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733065239278 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.