Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios

Living with family provides better facility of health as well as study.In today era,most students stay with family and some visit to other city to get education at colleges. This essay will discuss pros and cons of these things and help other to understand the situation.

Firstly,the main profit with staying with parents is their guidence and emotional support which help us to push ourself to brighter future.Also,having elder near us will help to take right decision at difficult situation. Having them will save our time in lot of things like cooking,washing clothes and so on. Secondly,they will be there in every situation for us to support us at bad situation. Having them at back will provide confidence to us that we can focus on our study purposes. The important profit having them is they will help to choose our path. Staying under guidence of family will always be beneficial for our career.

The cons are quite more of not having parents with us during our higher studies after moving to another state. Students have to prepare their own meal wash there dishes and clothes which kill time of individual and there will be shortage of time in studying. Student will not have emotional or moral support by there family member during their higher studies at campus. They will not have access to there parents during any difficult situation. Student will lose there concentration of studying if they stay alone. Also, student may feel home sickness and can go to depression. So famil

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92885375494 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58402515868 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.068387651 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189483267224 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674675526544 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064790436319 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156848948474 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680171742245 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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