Do you agree with this opinion that family is the most important influence on young adults?
I always think that family is the most important influence on young adults ,while others may take an different opinion, firmly believing that the key point which influence young adults most is the surroundings ,such as, teachers,classmates,and the person passed by .I never deny the faction of surroundings , but I will show you the reasons for my view . My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
observing objectively, you’ll always find that the little boy who eat little candy may have a doctor father,and the little gilr who dress appropriately may have a elegant mother. Besides ,singer's children may also singing well and athlete's children will also have a strong body. Why? That is, young adults who know little will imitate the person surrounding them when the child get used to the daily life. There is no doubt that the person is the families ,and this time is also the most important time for young adults.
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that family is the most important influence on young adults.just like a Chinese saying goes "like father ,like son."
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Hi Elia,
Good essay, I am also just like you beginner
well in the first para last line : "...but I will show you the reasons for my view" will look better I think if writen as
"..but I will show you the reason according to my view"
We can also write the situation of the younger alult in apsence of the family as well contribution of the family in the progress of celebrities.
I agree with your opinion…
I agree with your opinion. The education and love of the family greatly affect the development of adolescents. krunker
Hi, Elia, good job! Try to put more words! Keep writing!