The provided diagram illustrates the process of recycling rainwater in a city in Australia.
Overall, the recycling process of water from rain requires 5 stages in total. It starts with the collecting of stormwater by a system of drains, followed by various treatment steps, and ends with ready clean water for sunny days.
In particular, the first stage of the process involves the gathering of rainwater by a set of drains around the house. Following that, the collected water is delivered by pipes to the water recycling plant where four treatment stages respectively take place. After plastic and litter are eliminated from the water, there is a process of removing minor particles from the water. Subsequently, bacteria and viruses are discarded from the liquid, and then the last step in the treatment stage is getting rid of molecules and salt in the water.
In the third stage of the process, the treated water is transferred to a tank containing chlorine ( 4ml/g) to disinfect the water. Afterward, disinfected water continues to flow to a storage tank. Ultimately, the stored water is available for use on days without rain.
- Essay 6 Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The chart compares the number of people per household by percentage in the UK in 1981 and 2001 73
- Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this Is this positive or negative development 78
- The infographics below show employment statistics for UK residents by English language proficiency in 2013 57
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ransferred to a tank containing chlorine 4ml/g to disinfect the water. Afterward,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, third, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11229946524 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77762061826 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6098144736 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659373296404 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357234581018 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641141122161 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751176055928 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852723653608 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.