Education is one of the key factors for a person's personality growth. Students should not accept any courses offered by the colleges they should choose the courses that they like. All the universities should provide this option to choose fields of their interest in studying. I strongly agree with this point cause of various reasons. I will be discussing two of the points.
Education helps a person to grow and choose whatever career path they like. It should not be thrown on them. It should be of their interest so that they can give their 100% in that course. It's better to master one course compared to learning all of them in less amount. For instance, in survey people who choose the path of courier succeed in their life as compared to aimless people. They run in the race just with their friends for enjoyment. So, I believe working on a course you like might lead you to a better future. It is also said that little knowledge is very dangerous. A person of his interested course and try to learn everything about it.
Choosing a career shapes your future. Students should have some small goals or milestones so that they can evaluate and choose their paths to do various. They are the ones to choose their path, not their university. Choosing a course is like choosing your path to your happiness. The path you choose today leads you to your dream or ambition. For instance, if you plan to become a software developer then you need to choose where you learn to code, learn algorithms and tables, etc. If u choose subjects like arts and music you won't be able to succeed in the future. Well, I believe that at the end of the day a person wants to earn a lot of money to have a happy life but at what cost? Doing work that helps you grow and gives you joy and happiness would be better than taking work that you don't like which gives you pain and suffering.
Spit money can buy you anything in your life but it can't buy us the happiness that life gives every time you do a course of your work So, I believe that universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ucation is one of the key factors for a persons personality growth. Students should not...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uld be better than taking work that you dont like which gives you pain and suffering...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...an buy you anything in your life but it cant buy us the happiness that life gives ev...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...an buy you anything in your life but it cant buy us the happiness that life gives ev...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48974358974 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2931579333 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4196506091 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9583333333 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79166666667 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240462153883 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677342351375 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100168100945 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210082640172 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129897412854 0.0667264976115 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ucation is one of the key factors for a persons personality growth. Students should not...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uld be better than taking work that you dont like which gives you pain and suffering...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...an buy you anything in your life but it cant buy us the happiness that life gives ev...
^^^^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...an buy you anything in your life but it cant buy us the happiness that life gives ev...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48974358974 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2931579333 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476923076923 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4196506091 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9583333333 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79166666667 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240462153883 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677342351375 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100168100945 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210082640172 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129897412854 0.0667264976115 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 14.1392134831 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.