Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Every country in this world has established judiciary system to maintain standard rules and regulations to create viable atmosphere for their citizens. Some nations have modified legal protocols to give second chance to people to rehabilitation, on the other hand, individuals believes that rigid as well as long imprisonment is better solution for society to stabilize the decorum. I also in favor to give long during imprisonment if the person found culprit. By doing such type of practice, human beings will try to avoid committing the crimes.
Furthermore, nowadays most developed as well as developing countries are making their laws ease, because they assume that everyone should get another chance to live life and they are bound to do remorse for that. Governments has introduced multiple programs if someone want to reform their life. To illustrate, Canada government has initiated a program where prisoners need to serve the old age Homes, Churches in supervision of copes. According to latest report of Ireland famous newspaper article, Ireland law agency has also introduced a rehabilitation program for prisoners and results are up to the marks.
In this contrast, some republic countries are maintaining different approach towards prisoners, while follows strong and mandatory protocols to punish the criminals. Lawbreakers must be done multiple hard works while serve the sentence. To cite an example, in India offenders must clean the floor, washrooms, preparation of wooden items, cook the food for all prisoners, gardening, not only but also, move the bricks from one location to other. Such types of hard work they need to do feel the regret their mistakes which they made, such as, thief, murder.
To conclude, law-agencies should make law harder, in addition to this, judiciaries should increase the penalty amount with duration of imprisonment. So, more people follow the rules regulations. If individual feel the fear of law, they obey the order and one day all citizens of countries would become habitual to maintain the decorum. It would create significant impact on future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...introduced multiple programs if someone want to reform their life. To illustrate, Ca...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...ches in supervision of copes. According to latest report of Ireland famous newspaper arti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37237237237 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8186762721 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654654654655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2088738546 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147370610012 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394186604911 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320948115985 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798881639419 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017895146269 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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