There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.
Nowadays, more and more people who desire to settle and work in big cities while others want to be in the countryside. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.
On the one hand, living in big cities has a lot of merits. First of all, the more developing cities, the more good occupation because there are many international and private companies located in big cities, so it is easy to find a job there. In addition, we can try nourishment that originated in different countries. For example, Ho Chi Minh attracts lots of foreigners as it is the largest commercial center in Vietnam. Therefore, they also bring the distinctive diets of their areas.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks we have in big cities. Traffic jams are a problem in cities since the more people, the more vehicles such as cars, motorbikes, and buses. They can be seen during rush hours, which wastes time and annoys people. Moreover, smoke and dirt from various kinds of means of expression cause air pollution which is another problem.
In conclusion, living in big cities has both benefits and demerits. If you want to place that is clean and peaceful, then you should live in the countryside. However, if you rush to good careers, big cities are a good choice.
- Part 1 You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and apologize Explain why you cannot be able to meet your friend Sugg 60
- There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities 53
- Part 1 You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and apologize Explain why you cannot be able to meet your friend Sugg 100
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7389380531 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64335631393 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2256869277 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311191467443 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115152505621 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128643750113 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207698378429 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118625391827 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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