Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Changing the world quickly is undoubtedly a crucial thing in everyone's life. A controversial issue is whether to work three days a week with longer hours or the opposite. On condition that I was obliged to choose, I would prefer to work long hours in three days for several reasons, a few of which I will elaborate on subsequently.
To begin with, working three days a week would give you more time for your private life and goals. I guess that my personal experience influenced my opinion. You see, once I have been working in a company three days a week for longer hours, I was in the company those three days just sitting behind my PC and focusing on my task, but instead, I could spend the rest of the week with my family and friends, and perform art objects such as painting and playing music and furthermore go to the gym.
The next reason in line is that when you concentrate on a task for long hours you will do that in the best manner. For instance, three years earlier, when I was working in a company five days a week, there were times that I got deeply concentrated on my project, but suddenly it was time to go home. Therefore, I could finish a project in several months instead of one month, so the money I earned would be a small amount for a month. It did not satisfy me and I had to change my job.
To recap, taking the above-mentioned reasons and examples into account, working three days a week for longer hours is more acceptable. Not only have you more time for your own life, but it also provides you with a better chance to concentrate on your job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i guess, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34576271186 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4988454674 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0902695302 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108152645037 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052324117218 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393667719712 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773842729194 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216600099407 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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