Nowadays, there is a new trend that more and more people would like to research the history of the house or building they live in. This phenomenon is special and reasonable, since the history is attractive for people,especially the history by your sides. I will address my analyzations and reserching methods as follows.
To begin with, there are three reasons for people researhing the history of the living places they live in.Almost every one will ask themselves the same question:"Who I am? Where I was from ? Where I will go?" Surely this philosophy issue puzzles people at some time of our lives. While we can find the answer from the history which tells us what happened in the past as an direction for us instructs our future. At present, the history around us is a feasible and facinating since it triggers people's curiosities. The history in the book may be falsified by the government, and the paintings in the past would not be the best choice since there are not so many atr work around everyone. However, the houses as well as buidlings are everywhere since people need place to live in.When the buidings have been created for decades, the stories about the cement or wooden constructions are just like magnetics grab people's eyes, so firstly, some people like to research the buildings just for fun.Secondly, the history of the buildings people live in are more vivid than that in the book since you can hardly find a book just records the past of a certain bulding.Since that is so trivial to the public.But as for the people live in, it is a special gift for them that tells them what happened in this place before they born, who lived here, who moved out and what happened in the past. All of sudden, perhaps, the past they find and the view at present in the house will combine togehter which enrich the culture value of the house. Thirdly, as a history of the building, some people recognize it as a key common memory which can be inherited to the offsprings. When the people in the futre read the history of the buidlings found by their predcessors, they will konw the past of the place they live in and the common memory keeps alive forever.
Given the reasons and significance of researching history of the buildings people live in. There are three suggestions about how to do the study of people's investigation on these houses and buildings. At first, the online materials are essential to the research. Keywords should be the adress of people's live place and google always surprise you. Moreover, the local governments annual records of the place. It would bring a general background and you may find some clue of the buildings' history.Secondly, you should go to the local library to find some history materials of the place you live in, that will give you more details. At last, asking the old people live near you, they are the walking history.
To conclude, it is more and more interesting to research the history of the buldings people live in. It is real for them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
...nce the history is attractive for people,especially the history by your sides. I will addre...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Almost
...story of the living places they live in.Almost every one will ask themselves the same ...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...h tells us what happened in the past as an direction for us instructs our future. ...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding history'?
Suggestion: the surrounding history
...or us instructs our future. At present, the history around us is a feasible and facinating since it t...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...here since people need place to live in.When the buidings have been created for deca...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... to research the buildings just for fun.Secondly, the history of the buildings people li...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...t records the past of a certain bulding.Since that is so trivial to the public.But as...
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Line 3, column 1170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t records the past of a certain bulding.Since that is so trivial to the public.But as...
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Line 3, column 1209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
....Since that is so trivial to the public.But as for the people live in, it is a spec...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...round and you may find some clue of the buildings history.Secondly, you should go to the ...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...find some clue of the buildings history.Secondly, you should go to the local library to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as for, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 526.0 315.596192385 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7319391635 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66590787549 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444866920152 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 131.561505586 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.136363636 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492535572629 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138134781377 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113770134748 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339787103934 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422552079801 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
...nce the history is attractive for people,especially the history by your sides. I will addre...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Almost
...story of the living places they live in.Almost every one will ask themselves the same ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...h tells us what happened in the past as an direction for us instructs our future. ...
^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding history'?
Suggestion: the surrounding history
...or us instructs our future. At present, the history around us is a feasible and facinating since it t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...here since people need place to live in.When the buidings have been created for deca...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1003, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... to research the buildings just for fun.Secondly, the history of the buildings people li...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...t records the past of a certain bulding.Since that is so trivial to the public.But as...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t records the past of a certain bulding.Since that is so trivial to the public.But as...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
....Since that is so trivial to the public.But as for the people live in, it is a spec...
^^^
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...round and you may find some clue of the buildings history.Secondly, you should go to the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...find some clue of the buildings history.Secondly, you should go to the local library to ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as for, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 526.0 315.596192385 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7319391635 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66590787549 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444866920152 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 131.561505586 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.136363636 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492535572629 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138134781377 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113770134748 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339787103934 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422552079801 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.