Hi Tom,
How's going these days? I hope you and Sara are all well, and just drive slowly and carefully. Because I'm writing this letter to tell you that I can't go to watch the home match Manchester United V.S. Chlesa with you on holiday due to my car accident last week.
This was a busy September for me, as the business and life I told you, I just wanted to travell to Machester to watch the home match of the United team against Chelsa with you, I need relax and we planned this trip early.
However, I think I can't make it becuase my leg was broken. Last Wensday I drove home late and was sleepy. I did not notice the coming truck near the roundabout thus there was a big crash of my car with the truck.My right leg, also , was stuck in the brake paddle. I was taken into hospital immediately. With the broken leg, thank god there is nothing else serious of my body.
I want to watch the game with you, but I think we may alternate out plan.Due to the recovery time of my leg, shall we go to London for the away match of the two teams? We may plan another trip and cancel the hotel we booked.
I'm waiting for your reply, and again, drive carefully.
Yours sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ed this trip early. However, I think I cant make it becuase my leg was broken. Last...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22907488987 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08014992239 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9070691206 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8461538462 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215662049458 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727968452964 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694005504881 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113041617842 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662351023711 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.