The line graph compares three countries in terms of the level of household recycling over a period of 10 years.
From an overall perspective, all figures experienced a sharp increase except for France’s. In addition, it is notable that France constituted the lowest figure by the end of the period despite ranking 1st in 2005.
In 2005, the proportion for household recycling levels in the UK was 35%, which was higher than that of Germany, at about 20%. In the following 4 years, the figure for the UK witnessed a slight increase to 40%. Meanwhile, there was a significant growth in the data for Germany to over 30%. Over the rest period, the UK’s household recycling levels surged at over 60%, being the highest figure. A similar trend was observed in the statistics for Germany with a sharp increase to nearly 60% in the final year.
Turning to France, starting at about 50% in 2005, the figure for Germany went through a steady drop to 30% in 2013. This was followed by a recovery of 10% in 2015.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he period despite ranking 1st in 2005. In 2005, the proportion for household re...
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...her than that of Germany, at about 20%. In the following 4 years, the figure for t...
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...eanwhile, there was a significant growth in the data for Germany to over 30%. Ove...
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...rease to nearly 60% in the final year. Turning to France, starting at about 50%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67415730337 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56765543591 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0176019602 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102659104993 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452130409242 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620026501592 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834938273812 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764215626201 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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