Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing they like to do – rather than doing things they should do.
From past time, human beings have concerned about their restricted lifespan and made an effort with using their life more efficiently. Consequently, throughout history, time has played a prevailing role in human’s life. In this regard, there is a long-stand heated debate among people about whether nowadays people things which they interested in or things which are beneficial for them. Some people are leading proponents of the claim that people use their time optimally and do advantageous things. However, from my own perspective, this statement is false; as a matter of fact, I completely disagree with such people and I strongly believe that all attempts and ambitions notwithstanding, majority of people spent most of their time by doing enjoyable activities instead of beneficial ones. In the subsequence paragraphs, I will delve into three conspicuous reasons in order to aptly elaborate on my standpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that as the sources of enjoyment increase, people are gaining more access to entertainment. The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes they have made in humans’ lives. One of these changes is advent of new devices which are utilized for entertaining. To shed light on this issue, prior to modern era, owing to devoid of technology, people just had a few things to enjoy, such as horse riding, drinking, having conversation, and etc. In contrast, in modern era, due to existence of various sources, folks are able to have fun more than past. for instance, nowadays internet, cell phones, game consoles, computers, and so on make a significant contribution to having great time.
Furthermore, it is established beyond doubt that stereotypes and convictions have made changes over the years. Previous generations primarily assume that hard-working individuals who spend most of their time on improving themselves are idol humans. Nonetheless, new generations have a different opinion and asserts that human’s life is short and humans must live in the moment. They, therefore, have tendency to spend their time on amusing hobbies.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that in current time, individuals earn salaries more than they eraned past time. Money is one of the key factors of having convenient life. When people cannot afford their expenses, they are involved with working and making money to provide for their families. In other words, they do not have time in abundant to do what they would like. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by recent ground-breaking research conducted in our country, indicate that approximately 80 percent of citizens make enough money to live, and the incomes have dramatically increased. thus, such salient change in salaries has assisted to become conditions more plausible to have time for pleasant activities.
to wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that seldom do people make an effort with burgeoning their abilities and do lucrative things for society. It is anticipated that if people keep taking action such that, in a few years, the productivity of work force will sharply decline. Moreover, I strongly recommedn that people avoid acting like that and attempt to produce highly effective outcomes which culminate in thriving society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2802.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32699619772 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94180128463 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572243346008 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 871.2 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7397332779 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.08 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.04 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261543163042 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712291682193 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972819976972 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147493677707 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706587875162 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 86.8835125448 188% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.