IELS Writing task 1 line graph US Enery consumption by Fuel(1980-2030)
The line graph depicts the consumption of energy in the US between 1980 and 2030.
Overall, the line graph shows that total energy consumption in the United States increased.In addition, fossil fuels have shown a strongly rising rate of consumption.
In terms of fossil fuels, the consumption of coal started to grow slightly and then peaked in 1995. However, the natural gas intersected with the natural coal.
many times, and at the end of the period, it stood at 25 quadrillion units from 2015 on. The petroleum industry followed the natural gas trends, but it grew stronger than them. The price of gasoline is expected to skyrocket by the end of 2030.
In other hand,cleaner energy fuel sources, on the other hand, all began the period under 5 quadrillion units and began to decline slightly in their use, with the exception of nuclear, which climbed slightly to 6 quadrillion units in 2005, while solar and wind are expected to increase slightly. Hydropower is predicted to remain relatively unchanged until 2030.'''
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...sumption in the United States increased.In addition, fossil fuels have shown a str...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...gas intersected with the natural coal. many times, and at the end of the period, it...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cleaner
...ket by the end of 2030. In other hand,cleaner energy fuel sources, on the other hand,...
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Line 8, column 154, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...began to decline slightly in their use, with the exception of nuclear, which climbed slightly to 6 qu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05294117647 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67323657233 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.033290752 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193849126315 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882147339751 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131798100221 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140048926888 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155641019805 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.