In this cutting-edge era, it’s prevalent for students to travel abroad for their tertiary education. There are multitudinous justifications for why they strive to pursue their education oversea in lieu of their own country. This essay endeavors to shed light on those reasons before concluding that I’m likely to consider doing this myself.
Firstly, traveling abroad enables students to meliorate their environment and experience. For instance, students can seek for better education system comprising teaching methods, curriculum, facilities, and so on. In addition, students can stand an immensely good chance of experiencing ample cultures and languages. Moreover, the life quality of those students will be enhanced from medical requirements to entertainment. For those reasons, it is worth having a higher education in a foreign for those who crave living better.
Secondly, it’s a great opportunity to improve your self-development. Traveling far from your country will you be more independent to earn a living yourself. Besides, your self-discipline can be increased as a result of conforming to those novel contexts. Furthermore, you are bound to be flexible owing to the fact that there are manifold unexpected situations. As a result, under no circumstances will you be mature and effortlessly live.
To summarize, I also have a tendency to study abroad for my university education. From the two points in my essay, I concur that it’s deserved to travel abroad for your higher education.
In this cutting-edge era, it’s prevalent for students to travel abroad for their tertiary education. there are multitudinous justifications for why they strive to pursue their education oversea in lieu of their own country. this essay endeavors to shed light on those reasons before concluding that I’m likely to consider doing this myself.
Firstly, traveling abroad enables students to meliorate their environment and experience. For instance, students can seek for better education system comprising teaching methods, curriculum, facilities, and so on. In addition, students can stand an immensely good chance of experiencing ample cultures and languages. Moreover, the life quality of those students will be enhanced from medical requirements to entertainment. For those reasons, it is worth having a higher education in a foreign for those who crave living better.
Secondly, it’s a great opportunity to improve your self-development. traveling far from your country will you be more independent to earn a living yourself. Besides, your self-discipline can be increased as a result of conforming to those novel contexts. Furthermore, you are bound to be flexible owing to the fact that there are manifold unexpected situations. As a result, under no circumstances will you be mature and effortlessly live.
To summarize, I also have a tendency to study abroad for my university education. From the two points in my essay, I concur that it’s deserved to travel abroad for your higher education.
- Topic 2 Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education Why do people do this Would you consider doing this yourself and why
- In this cutting edge era it s prevalent for students to travel abroad for their tertiary education There are multitudinous justifications for why they strive to pursue their education oversea in lieu of their own country This essay endeavors to shed light 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55172413793 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19072675383 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3599768518 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478361000054 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147734562944 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189122701556 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304097324616 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.302530401357 0.056905535591 532% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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