Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Being creative, rather than planning carefully more often results in the best solution of a problem.
If I were asked which weapon I prefer to use to win a battle—shield or spear, I think I would lose using any weapon alone. It can be vividly compared to this topic. When finding solutions to a problem, a careful plan is like a strong shield protecting us from going into chaos, while creativity is like a sharp spear helping us solve problems efficiently. We need both of them.
To begin with, let’s look at the importance of being creative. On the one hand, being creative can help people think out of the box and find effective solutions. On the other hand, without ideas coming from creative...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2016-09-13 | parth061 | 35 | view |
| 2015-12-14 | Samar 1984 | 73 | view |
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 87
- TPO 30. THE BURNING MIRROR 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.Use specific reasons and examples t 60
- Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which 80
Comments
Full essay evaluations
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 432 350
No. of Characters: 1970 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.559 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.56 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.575 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.404 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.252 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.403 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
PS. this is not my own essay, it is a sample response I found on the Internet and I just wanted to how many points it would get. Thank you every much.