After graduation, some students tend to get a job immediately, others like to study further. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When leaving university or college, people face the dilemma of whether to pursue a career immediately or to take further study. Although there are some positive aspects to studying more, I would argue that it is better to get to work.
The option to continue to study after graduation is appealing for several reasons. Firstly, people studying further could get a higher qualification that is priceless and timeless. Nowadays, there is an existing contradictory issue in the job market of many countries. While more and more people are unemployed, many companies are facing a shortage of labours. The main reason causes this problem is most of employees are inexperienced and they do not meet the demands of enterprises, so there is a huge number of opportunities for people being more qualified. Secondly, after graduating from universities, various students do not what they want to do thus studying more is a productive use of time. In this time, they also find a clear career goal that makes them move upwards towards a higher level of achievement.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for graduates to get work. The major reason is they would have a financial incentive that make them become independent and self-sufficient. As most students depend on their parents for tuition fee and cost of living for a long time, they want to be self-supporting to release burden on their parents. Besides, a stable income not only encourage people to work harder but it also improve their standard of living. Moreover, young people having careers could gain much experience that gives them both job and promotion opportunities. One of the most important evaluation criteria of recruitment is ability of applicants to put knowledge into practice, so an experienced candidate would earn more benefits.
In conclusion, it seems to me that young people are likely to thrive in their careers if they start working as soon as they get out of university or college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employees') or simply say ''most employees''.
Suggestion: most of the employees; most employees
... The main reason causes this problem is most of employees are inexperienced and they do not meet ...
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Line 4, column 436, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...urage people to work harder but it also improve their standard of living. Moreover, you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01823708207 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91206032609 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3726590939 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169413551855 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582665406522 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550584911208 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100817767317 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031864920149 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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