The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits
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The given diagram depicts the process of pears as canned fruits. It can be seen that there are lots of stage to make pear’s fruit.
Overall, there are a complicated process with fourteen steps to turn pears to fruit juice, including three main stages: picking, processing and canning and almost steps in this process is automatic
Firstly, people pick fresh pear from a tree and move its into a factory. After that, workers are washing and checking the quality of pears, it is an important part of making fruit’s juice. In the fourth stages, its preserve in a low temperature condition to keep the fresh in every pears. In the next 3 steps, workers turn pears into a automatic machine to grading, peeling and slicing to each pieces. In the nine and ten steps, the automatic machine move pieces of pears to can sealing its. After that, they can are cooking in a standard time in another machine. In the last main part, people labeling and storage in each of box and transport to market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re lots of stage to make pear’s fruit. Overall, there are a complicated process...
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...ost steps in this process is automatic Firstly, people pick fresh pear from a t...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...le pick fresh pear from a tree and move its into a factory. After that, workers are...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e next 3 steps, workers turn pears into a automatic machine to grading, peeling a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng, peeling and slicing to each pieces. In the nine and ten steps, the automatic m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69714285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33242275721 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.6217603895 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162764752983 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703006485453 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516109587237 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127878689327 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528043640806 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.