The natural resources such as oil and freshwater are being consumed at alarming rate What problems it can cause How can we solve this problem
In this cutting edge era,natural amenities like fossil fuel and natural water are used more and more.However,this cause problem like not natural amenities are save for future generation and it simple solution use different way of use of natural things as well as save them with control use
To begin with,in this paragraph showcases the proble about higher use of natural resources to elaborate, nowadays population is increase at alarming rate so more population consume more resources. Secondly,most people came to big city's and because of this urbanization also increase and this cause the more use of natural resources like water and oil.to substantiate many news report show that year by year population rose with double amount.
Additionally,this paragraph will give the solution for natural resources use.Firstly, people is the main parameter if they use natural resources with restrictions it give many benefits to us as well as our future generation.secondly, scientist are very creative now a days so scientist should made new technology where use of fossil fuels and oil was decreased and use solar energy as well as those resources which are non degraded with use.to illustrates many companies like tata,Tesla,Hyundai,launch electric bike which used small amount of natural oil and fuels and also some vehicle run with hydrogen in usa.
To conclude, there are many causes of decrease in natural resources like population and unusual use and also solution which decreases the natural resources consumption like use and other technology which decreases rate of use and safe for future generation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35968379447 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21584680956 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 22.4926829268 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.083911727 43.030603864 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.0 112.824112599 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.25 22.9334400587 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 5.23603664747 420% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160833903452 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11379614941 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355218432127 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113752893261 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354674688284 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.2329268293 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.39 61.2550243902 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.3012195122 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.9970731707 247% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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