The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

The graph illustrates the amount of coffee produced in Brazil , Colombia, Indonesia and Vietnam in the period 20 years, starting from 1990.
It can be seen that for all figures the overall trend was upward except for Colombia.It also noticeable that, the production of coffee in Brazil was the highest during the period shown.
In 1990, the coffee production in Brazil started the period with the highest figure, at about 0,7 million tonnes. Then there was a rocket over the next 20 years before peaking at 1,9 million tonnes in 2010. In contrast, that of Colombia was close to 0,6 0,6 million tonnes in 1990. It then decreased continuously before ending the course with the figure of 0,3 million tonnes.
Turing to the others, the amount of coffee produced in Vietnam started at 0,1 million tonnes, which is the lowest figure in comparison with the rest.The course from 1990 to 2010 saw an slight climb in the production of coffee in Vietnam and finished the period at roughly 0,3 million tonnes. Likewise,the coffee outcome in Indonesia started the course with the figure at nearly 0,2 million tonnes. Between 1990 to 2010, that number grew double to end the course at about 0,4 million tonnes.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, then, except for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88725490196 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35576930501 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495098039216 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3221061015 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204664688171 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101766239489 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701046042425 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135905124557 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486839049084 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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