Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer.
Education is an important part of our kids' lives whether they are boys or girls. Governments should guarantee that both genders get the same level of education without any discrimination between boys and girls. Therefore, I highly recommend and encourage that both boys and girls should attend the same schools and universities for the following reasons.
If boys and girls attend the same schools and universities, they will get equal opportunities of education. When they are together, they will study in the same laboratories, attend the same libraries, and learn from the same professors. In...
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No. of Different Words: 150 200
More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence. Can you check out how many sentences have 'they' as the subject?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 341 350
No. of Characters: 1655 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.297 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.853 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.593 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.092 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5