The chart illustrates the figures of vehicle theft per thousand in Great Britain Sweden France and Canada during the period between 1900 and 1999 Overall Great Britain had a far higher than the others In addition althogh there were a downward trend in thr

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The chart illustrates the figures of vehicle theft per thousand in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada during the period between 1900 and 1999. Overall, Great Britain had a far higher than the others. In addition, althogh there were a downward trend in three countries, Sweden in contrast.

To specify, first of all, in 1900, Great Britain lost about 17 cars per thousand. In the next 9 years, there were a significant fluctuation in this country, which reached the lowest point at approximately 14 automobiles out of thousand in 1999. The second highest were Sweden, at the beginning of researched period (1990), it had about 8 cars theft per thousand, 1 year later, it has a slightly decreased to 7, which met France in the same year. 5 years afterwards, this figures had dramatic increased to around 13 cars per thousand, in the same year, Great Britain also reached the peak at roughy 20. From 1996 to 1999, car theft in Sweden soared and hit the highest point at around 17.
The scenerio changed in France and Canada. In 1990, both countries had the figures at 6 and 7 cars theft per thousand, respectively. During 1 year, although this were stable in Canada, the others had a significant rocket reached 8 per thousand. Then, in the next 2 years, Canada hit a strong at 5 per thousand, whileas France witnessed a downward trend to 6. During the period between 1993 and 1999, France figures vacilliate slightly and reached around 5 cars per thousand at the end of this period. Also within this period, Canada has a unsignificant increase and still had the figure at 5 in 1999. Both Canada and France met the others in 1999 (5 automobiles out of thousand).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...per thousand at the end of this period. Also within this period, Canada has a unsign...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...od. Also within this period, Canada has a unsignificant increase and still had th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, then, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6378600823 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63065018805 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9986772278 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344434828686 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150907579788 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464078692671 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282434379732 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430839808424 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...per thousand at the end of this period. Also within this period, Canada has a unsign...
^^^^
Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...od. Also within this period, Canada has a unsignificant increase and still had th...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, then, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6378600823 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63065018805 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9986772278 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344434828686 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150907579788 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464078692671 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282434379732 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430839808424 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.