You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what type of work you are looking for
say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to register with your agency as a part-time civil engineer .You might wonder why I am looking for a part-time job rather than a full-time one?. The answer is that I am currently studying a master degree; therefore, I don’t have this option to work in a full-time job.
I prefer to work 12 hours per week, and also it is much better if you can find a job nearby my house at the centre of Cairo as I don’t have a private vehicle.
As you can see from my enclosed resume, I have graduated from Cairo University in 2000 with a cumulative grade of “very good”. Since this time I have been working in the civil engineering construction field- In particular, heavy construction projects that include bridges and underpasses. I have practised the civil engineering in several countries and recently I decided to return Egypt to finalizing my master degree.
Please could you let me know whether you have an appropriate job for me. Your prompt action is highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Tamer Amin
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I am currently studying a master degree
I am currently studying for a master degree
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 183 200
No. of Characters: 817 1000
No. of Different Words: 118 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.678 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.464 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.716 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.793 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4