Beginner is the person who have many ideas to deal with the problem, but expert is one of the persons who have experienced a lot of things in their life. Basically, expert have vast experience than beginner. therefore, I disagree with the statement that in any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions. here, in any field makes the above statement little bit confusing because some field of study requires freshers to explore more ideas likewise some field requires expert who have gain more experiences in their life.
we see many scientific creations around us. all those creations haven't become perfect. there are a lot of hard work behind it. people who have involve on those activities to create perfect creations on onetime doesn't achieve success because they have to face so many problems and failure; but these failures provide them a lot of experience to deal with the obstacles which make them expert. for example, a new chef can make a new dish perfectly but making the same dish again and again with same flavor and aroma makes him/her perfect and expert chef. similarly, newton-who discover that apple fell form the tree due to certain force didn't make him expert until he found that apple fell due to gravitational force.
in the aspect of in any field of inquiry we can say that in the field of bank and big business organization- they search for those candidates who have gain a lot of experiences on this field. this is for the reason that they have many new and experience ideas to deal with the problems to make the business profitable. hence, we can say that expert can contribute more than beginner in any field. for example, a new comer can make film which can attract many people, but that film maker was guided by a director who have a lot of experiences in the field of film industry. "Always listen to experts. They’ll tell you what can’t be done and why. Then do it.” Robert Heinlein has described in these lines the true meaning of an expert.
Although there is no comparison between experts and beginners but still there are beginners who have created history. Madam Curie is one such example who discovered radium. Radium is used till date and Madam Curie won Nobel Prize for this discovery of hers. A beginner has many ideas and his area of thinking is vast as compared to an expert’s restricted vision.
All the important discoveries are made by experts and there contribution in the history cannot be denied. In any field of enquiry, we need to trust our experts as they have put in so many years of research into it. There has been so much practice gone by an expert into discovering something and such practices make a perfectionist.
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities 70
- Teachers salary should be based on the academic performance of the students 66
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 50
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and Development 50
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, likewise, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75262054507 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52844268828 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.167301474 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4583333333 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301385862897 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890037026808 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110784260571 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175538643305 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100115068792 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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