Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same product anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
importing and exporting goods in countries with abundant food and fuel resources are becoming more and more popular, so it’s easy for people can buy one and the same product anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this is a beneficial development for several reasons, especially in some developing countries.
First and foremost, importing and exporting goods can help a country show how important it is to its neighbors and even to the world. this helps a country to demonstrate its ability in the field of business and commerce around the world when it has the ability to deliver goods to other places, as well as bring in goods from other places. For example, grasping the current market, Thailand and Vietnam has become one of the world's largest rice exporters that prove their position compared to other countries in the region.
Moreover, in the past, the number of products available was limited or perhaps non-existent. However, today, thanks to globalization and an increase in imports and exports, anything a person desires can be purchased, even things that used to be unknown in their area.
Finally, the accessibility of comparable goods throughout the globe encourages innovation and competitiveness. Companies are more inclined to invest in research and development to enhance their goods and services when they can reach a wider audience. this leads to a cycle of innovation and competition, resulting in better quality products for consumers worldwide. For instance, n the 1980s, Coca-Cola felt pressure to lose market share to rival Pepsi. competition has forced Coca-Cola to find a way to reinvent itself and find every solution to regain the top 1 position it once had.
In conclusion, the availability of similar products globally is a positive development that benefits both consumers and businesses as well as promotes innovation, and competitiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26245847176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98554850086 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4130005884 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250221177509 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770282684604 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854466647068 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135463139606 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10736111974 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.