The world of work is rapidly changing, and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is it the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?
The changing of economy’s globalization after covid-19 pandemic make work in the company become instability and as the result of there are many unemployed people because of depending on having the same jobs or like same conditions in their abilities. Now, I will give my own personal view and explain why having chances.
On the one hand, the first reason as well as the popularity of staff reduction in variety major at companies simple to maintain the financial aid for company’s business after covid pandemic so people need show flexiblity in many jobs to keep their job properly. In addition, people are living in the best conditions of life with AI technology, so they need gain more knowledge widely to improvise with their job variety if do not want to change by robots and machines. To be honest, living in the modern era is able to stressful with many excellent people so if someone want to make distinguish between a large of excellent people as well as exist in big companies with high position for a long time, is really hard to believe.
On conclusion, parents should register courses for their children about life skills or languages maybe it’s suitable for their kids in the futures. Beside that, people should enrich knowledge flexibility as much in many fields as posible. I think there are all way to not only improve yourself but also earn alot salary and have a stable job in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ith many excellent people so if someone want to make distinguish between a large of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, well, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81147540984 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59801156056 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1805230502 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214765966558 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863459639913 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749643831796 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151823015651 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812628751849 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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