Public Transport: Ways to encourage the use of public transport.
In a world of increasing environmental awareness, improved public transport represents the way of the future. Although the people do enjoy the convenience and privacy of travelling in their private vehicles, in my opinion, they can choose public transport, if it fulfills attitudinal, financial and logistical conditions.
Firstly, from the attitudinal point of view, people must be convinced about the benefits of the public transport system. Educational or mass media campaign must be launched to sensitize those who are not familiarized with the social, environmental and personal benefits of bo...
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Hai Sir... Thanks for your
Hai Sir...
Thanks for your support..
This essay is in IELTS catagory, i feel the word strength is enough as it needed 250 words only.
Hope it is a technical problem.
Thanks...
Tessy
Tessy, it is not a technical
Tessy, it is not a technical problem. More words, more marks.
People need to write about 500 words in 30 minutes for GRE issue essays. While it has 40 minutes available for IELTS essay writing task 2.
flaws:
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Different Words: 166 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Characters: 1652 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.233 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.146 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.922 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.919 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5