People`s attitude are determined more by their immediate situation or surrounding than society.
Who determines a person`s attitude the society or the situations surrounding the person? It is clear that many people judge others from the first day of their encounter with the person. This should not be the case. There are a lot of things that can have effect on people`s attitude and not just one thing. Whiles people`s attitudes are determined by their immediate situation, society also has an effect on their attitude.
There are a lot of happening in and around us and judging someone from one angle would not be fair. Telling from my point of view when I was a class representative, people are quick to judge and make conclusions. When I was a class rep I was tasked to write names of noise makers and one day I could not write names. I was punished severely for not writing names even though the class was noisy in the afternoon. The headmaster failed to here my site of the story that there was a discussion session during the afternoon. The headmaster could have given me time to explain myself. Therefore, the situation surrounding me at that instance made me not to write names because everyone was expected to contribute to the discussion. People`s attitude are determined by the immediate situation that surround them.
Furthermore, society also have some effect on how some people behave. There are some norms and cultural practices that show how a person should carry his/herself. Take for instance, the Ga festival celebrated in Accra. During the period of this festival people are prohibited from making noise, drumming or even shouting. At this time the city is almost silent. This situation would have effect on people living around Accra and how they should behave. Therefore, society also play an important role in determining people`s attitude.
Moving on, immediate situation such as family issues will also have effect and determines the attitude of a person. A divorce between Joe and Lydia made Lydia hostile and reprimand anyone who made a title mistake at her work place. Even to the point of using a bottle to hit one of her staffs. It is clear that the divorce situation have caused her and her attitude towards people.
In conclusion, it is certain from the above points that people`s attitude is not determined from one aspect but from both internal situations and society but most at times people`s attitudes are affect by internal situations they encounter everyday. Therefore, whiles people`s attitude are determined by their immediate situation, society also have effect on their attitude.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...st at times people's attitudes are affect by internal situations they encounter ever...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t by internal situations they encounter everyday. Therefore, whiles people's attitu...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06823529412 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8195128294 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444705882353 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7383545038 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42307692308 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366096229404 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11092884302 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142185392579 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234643669315 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125662800272 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...st at times people's attitudes are affect by internal situations they encounter ever...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t by internal situations they encounter everyday. Therefore, whiles people's attitu...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06823529412 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8195128294 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444705882353 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7383545038 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42307692308 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366096229404 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11092884302 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142185392579 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234643669315 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125662800272 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.