In today's highly competitive market, One of the main contributors to maximum the profits for big companies is marketing campaign. Advertising is the most choice for revenuers. Hence, There have two opposing opinions that Advertising is entirely source of success to appeal customers for range of products, whlist, Others claimed that it is very common and it is doomed to decline in this day and age. Personally, I would side with whose who think that Advertising has advatageous impacts for aspects of life.I will outine my reasons in this essay below.
To begin with, There have several underlying reasons to contend this notion. The advent of latter-day technology are associated with a surge of mass media and social networking are the top priority for advertising's progress. It uses repetition and emotional customers to attract clients and hesitate our decisions. Example, When we want t purchase some products, we may search some its information, customer reviews to clarify own views as well as the quality of products via some advertisements. Furthermore, It exploits our conscious and subconscious desires, fears, or anxieties, so they always bring us a safe emotion and the best customer services.
Last but not least, It cre ates a positive image of the product or service being advertised. Not only Highlighting the benefits of the product or service and how it can improve the lives of the customers, but also they could provide motivation and inspiration to the customers by using aspirational messages or images. Besides, Building a community around the product or service and making the customers feel part of it and make an equal competition for all businesses.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that Advertising still keeps a vital role in our life by above-mentioned ideas. Its accessibility and convenience brings beneficial merits and it will be a campaign marketing that are never anachronism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23701298701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04579893104 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3876807101 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124385108076 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376974552912 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430872588188 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651019380078 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486509202668 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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