Some people believe that we can't learn anything from the path for our life today . While others believe that the history is a valuable souce of information to understand human's life.
Human history is one of pivotal theme of study among the researchers, this led to some discussions regarding past on whether it is substantial subject or not. Nowadays it is argued by some that there is nothing in history that can benefit the human's life. However, others believe that it is an indispensable horizons of knowledge.From my perspective, I concur to later comment, owing to the Historical events can forecast the future repercussions and their probable solutions during the predicament circumstance.
On one side, the world is Innovative and progressing constantly every single day, especially in technological field, this is one of the predominant reasons that a section of society deny previous event from the past. It is evident that the time flies so fast and the humans have potential to alter according to the fast paced era. Moreover the plethora of old techniques or machines in olden days now become old- fashioned and useless. For vivid instance, the revolution of computer is the best example, due to the fact that ancient days the computer was like a gigantic building structure, but now it is more convenient to carry. Apart from this, even our old practice and beliefs about health sector is changing according to new technology .In short, these are reasonable remarks to avoid the past.
On the flip side of coin, others advocate that learning lessons from ancient times provide a outstanding outlook to the present situation. Consequently it is effortless to anticipate upcoming issues,envisage possible solutions to ameliorate deleterious impact. To cite an epitome, the world war occurred twice in history and their aftermath were terrified and inevitable milestone in world history. Lust for power is the main culprit to the catastrophe of nations in times of war. This moral lesson valuable in modern period.
To recapitulate, historical background can sometimes influence our lives, especially their experience, findings and conclusions are beneficial to the present society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32915360502 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02336105363 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1393232921 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549855485859 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060873959701 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993333156614 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714104562352 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
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linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
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text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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