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The world has changed a lot .Today's world is not a safe place to bring up children.
Discuss. Substantiate your ideas with reasons. (RE-WRITE)
Information technology and globalization have ushered a new era of better life style. However, they have also brought with them some evils. Some people believe that the world today is not a safe place to bring up children. In this essay, I will discuss why I am favoring this statement.
Admittedly, the quality of life has improved by leaps and bounds by technological advancements. Nevertheless, it is clear that somewhere we have lost our values and priorities due to the over influence of globalization. Most of us are not empathic to our fellow beings sufferings and immune to violence. Crimes...
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