Concern for the environment is growing and more and more people are choosing to recycle. But some people suggest that recycling is not enough. They believe we need to consume less. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Concern for the environment has recently increased. As a result, more people decide to recycle as an effective method. However, others argue that we need to reduce the use of non-recyclable products in addition to recycling. From my perspective, I believe consuming less is a vital additional solution.
On the one hand, recycling is the easiest and most affordable way for people to apply. People can learn how to reuse their recyclable materials to make new items by from watching videos on the internet. People also save a certain amount of money by from spending less on purchasing new products. Recycling food waste to make homemade compost is also economically beneficial. Moreover, recycling helps cut climate-changing carbon emissions because the process of manufacturing raw materials such as metal requires a large amount of fossil fuels. In addition, recycling reduces the amount of waste thrown away into the environment, which causes harmful impact on vulnerable animals.
On the other hand, using less non-recyclable products is a necessary solution. As society has to deal with a huge amount of non-recyclable waste annually, recycling such a massive amount like that is impossible. In fact, In fact, not every material or item can be recycled properly, such as food-stained storage or plastic foam. Furthermore, reducing the use of non-recyclable items can be time-saving and effortless because people do not spend time and knowledge to recycle household products.
In conclusion, I think people should recycle and limit their use of non-recyclable products to keep the environment clean. Both governments and local authorities must motivate citizens by introducing stricter environmental laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents and local authorities must motivate citizens by introducing stricter environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, so, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49056603774 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21051139392 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6290107688 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282256605844 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101091857762 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528302710011 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189817771701 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614950874789 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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