In the contemporary lives, people are performing differenrently from the past due to the evolvement of society in which technologies and spending habits are amongst factors. I totally argree with this point of view.
In terms of technologies, there are many modern inventions, from daily and prevailing devices like smartphones, smartwatches, tablets or computers, laptops to high-tech development of robots, AI, 3D printing, etc...that serve human needs. Along with the necessity of global connection nowadays, humans have been relying more on these techniques that makes their lives changing drastically compared to the old days. Accessing the Internet is no longer a new work for people at ranging ages. they go online almost everyday for various purposes: looking up for information, entertainment, working, studying and there were a lot of researches conducted refering to the inconvenience without electronics. Besides, advanced techniques like robots are becoming more useful in regions utilizing them, particularlly in developed countries. we now see robots in different places such as in the laboratory dedicating to science and research or in the factories in which productivity increases and labors do not have to work mannually much, thanks to the successful apply of high-techs. The robots even appear in rich families to help them out with household chores and other activities. All of these proves a big impact of technologies to human lives.
On the other hand, citizens have the tendency of buying and selling more because of the rising demand. The acceleration of trade direct consumers to more smart and innovative goods with good-looking designs, which attract their interests and boosts the purchasing power. Most of buyers have a mindset that they can be able to approach to newest products in order to keep updated to this unstoppably growing world and improve their life quality.
In conclusion, we are living in technological and integral era where mentioned factors play a crucial role. As a result, transformation in lives will certainly be a thing that exists more or less in every corner of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... spending habits are amongst factors. I totally argree with this point of view. In terms of t...
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Line 2, column 490, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... a new work for people at ranging ages. they go online almost everyday for various p...
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Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... at ranging ages. they go online almost everyday for various purposes: looking up for in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
..., particularlly in developed countries. we now see robots in different places such...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the buyers') or simply say ''Most buyers''.
Suggestion: Most of the buyers; Most buyers
...erests and boosts the purchasing power. Most of buyers have a mindset that they can be able to...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the newest'.
Suggestion: to the newest
...ndset that they can be able to approach to newest products in order to keep updated to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35119047619 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04757254429 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657738095238 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8830712491 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.866666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101541303612 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313425145017 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316198631469 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614876819277 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332352082973 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.