Some people believe that the government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is essential for any country. As a stepping stone for the future development of the country. Therefore, some people believe that the government should spend more on education than recreation and sports. In this essay, I will discuss how much I agree or disagree with this statement.
In the current context of globalization and international integration, education is increasingly showing its importance in raising people's intellectual level. Therefore, each country needs to focus on promoting education and comprehensive development for the entire population in order to create a foundation for a strong economy. For example, education aims to train and develop human resources with a large number of professional and technical qualifications, high skills, ability to practice, initiative, creativity, and responsibility in work. Thereby increasing labor productivity. Not only that, education is also a necessity for the growth and personal development of each person. For example, education will provide the necessary knowledge and skills to help people easily adapt to any situation. Not only stopping there but more importantly, education aims at training, cultivating morality, and perfecting one's personality.
On the other hand, it also does not mean that other fields such as sports, and recreation are not important, it helps people maintain fitness and can also be considered as a job. For example, there are many people in the world who achieve great success in the fields of recreation and sports even though their education is not so excellent. If the government reduces funding for these fields to promote education, many people will be deprived of professional careers.
In conclusion, although education is a stepping stone for the development of a country and is also essential for human development, besides sports and recreation also play a significant part in those things. Therefore, I disagree that the government should spend more on education than on entertainment and sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.3376753507 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53074433657 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18534402609 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8534234937 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265225037175 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101959245287 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13627926444 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195315498256 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921149603846 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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