Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.
What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages?
These days it is a common practice for people to have children in their mid-thirties. They follow it owing to the various reasons. Certainly, at some level this is not encouraged by many however, there are a few advantages which cannot be ruled out. This essay will explain the reasons of this phenomenon and its merits.
In this competitive world, building a successful career has become a priority. Due to this, people spend more and more time making money, in the meantime, repressing their social responsibilities like reproduction. Another aspect leading to latter pregnancies is the advanced medical technologies. In-vitro fertilization techniques like test-tube babies or freezing eggs have eased the process of getting pregnant at any age. Unlike in the older time, women today can bear a child even in their fifties. However, these techniques are not always conclusive and sometimes may lead to depression and frustration among patients while going through painful, lengthy and ineffectual procedures.
On the other hand, there are some pros to keep in mind. Firstly, at the later age people will become financially stable owing to their high-paying jobs. This money would provide them with the better opportunities to take care of their infant’s needs. Secondly, as a person ages his level of maturity and understanding also increases. He will be able to take care of his child in a much better way compared to a impoverished young parent. Overall, children backed-up with a strong financial and mental support will grow-up to become a healthy and a happy human being.
In conclusion, despite facing the difficulties of child-bearing in later life, peoples still follow this trend. This is because, they are adamant to provide their children with an environment where they do not have to compromise on wealth or psychological aspect in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93494463321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2392615637 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254190382413 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639464209009 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705071322673 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15348723687 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725298352854 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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