memorable place which you visited and why it was special to you
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- Using the main points and examples from the lecture, describe the three parts of a fax machine and then explain how the fax process works. 70
- tpo 6 task 2 80
- Some people do not enjoy shopping and shop only when they have a specific purchase to make. Others like to go shopping for pleasure whether or not they have something to buy. Which do you prefer and why? 60
- Describe a feature of your city that you consider interesting and explain why you think it is interesting. Include details and examples to support your explanation. 67
- tpo 6 task 6 80
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but here i tried not to
but here i tried not to follow reason 1 ex 1 reason 2 ex 2 to score high...if i want to do in this way how should i improve.. i need 26. so gradually i have to change my pattern from old one.
If you want to score high,
If you want to score high, you should not give long examples. Just generally talk.
This is the pattern you are using now which is a wrong pattern:
1. introduction
2. example 1
3. example 2
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You will have to use the pattern we listed above to score high:
First, reason 1 + why reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason1 //don't need examples here
Second, reason 2 + why reason 2 + a small conclusion for reason2 //don't need examples here
or use the old pattern you used:
1. introduction
2. reason 1 ex 1
3.reason 2 ex 2
22 in 30
Need reasons first, then examples. for example, in the second reason, need to say:
It can improve the relationship. for example...
Don't forget our patterns for Q1-Q2:
first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5-10 seconds
First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 1(like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + why reason 2 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 2(like advantages of reason 2 or comparisons if not reason 2, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds
Conclusion: Don't need a conclusion. (you can have one only when you don't have something to talk about)
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An example (Eating at home or restaurant) for First:
First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 1-2 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant;) + small conclusions ( 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
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Don't try to make something new before you are good at this pattern.