Major education is major extremely mean, students will have to prepare knowledge of educational management and educational psychology like how people learn at different ages. Population by seminary or academe at many, unlike cause, for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.
Firstly of all, it is worth considering shorter training than university as the right choice for major students, a job with a stable income and easily connect to help improve professional knowledge and skills for students. Not only save money for parents and students but also help students get a job early and a very stable income.
secondly, studying at a university and I suppose discovering their potential oneself helps students realize that their specialty does not suitable for them. Moreover, practice many different skills such as soft negotiation skills, workgroup, and communication,... And create relationships for instance some friends and professors.
To sum up, In my opinion, going to university will bring a lot of benefits to students and their future, and over a long period of training they will have a deeper understanding of their profession thanks to those benefits. more people choose to go to university than college
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also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85858585859 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84251505485 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.300124516 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.714285714 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1428571429 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204911319184 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936797775446 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600674409606 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111805233501 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107525174153 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.78957915832 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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