Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (RE-WRITE)
People are different and their perceptions of life are diverse. Some people think that difficult hobbies are more enjoyable than easy hobbies, but others oppose. In my opinion both easy and difficult hobbies are equally have fun and excitements.
Hobbies are activities chosen by people to fill their leisure time without expecting monitory benefits. Thus the ultimate aim of hobbies is enjoyment and relaxation. People can select different hobbies according to their available free time, nature of daily work and interest. Some people find enjoyment in easy hobbies like reading. After a full da...
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Sentence: Nevertheless, dedication, constant long hard work and practice let them to be prefect in their hobbies.
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