Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
At first, what are known as inherent abilities? The abilities, which are acquired by us, since birth are called inherent abilities, but it does not mean physical abilities soley, however, physical capabilities of people fall in this category. Men and women are two wheel of the society- without one our society cannot run smoothly: they both play a pivotal role. Does the inherent physical differences (body structure) can be used to judge their potential. In my opinion, absolutely not; because there are a lot of examples around us which clearly signifies that task, which can be done by men, can also be done by women. Therefore, I am at odds with the above statement, that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical differences.
To commence, there are a lot of tasks which can be done by both genders equally. In my own family, my both parents are engaged in job and guess what, they both do the same job- teaching. My father and mother are both lectures, then how can we say that they are not suited for the same tasks. From this scenario of my family, we can confidently aver that both genders are equally fitted for same task. Likewise, beside this, there are many people who are being involve in politics, we can see both men and women running the politics vivaciously, moreover, women are also winning the election by leaving men behind them and, as a result, they are carrying out their task with full courage. Hence, though they have physical differences, they can be suitable for same task.
In addition, I would like to elucidate my opinion more deeply. In aforementioned view, we can see how women can be fitted to task, which is being done by men. Likewise, men can also do the task, that our society assume to the task of women. For example, looking after a new born baby is a very difficult task, which we people think the main responsibility of mother, but it can also be done by father. In my neighborhood, there is a family, in which mother goes to job and she has a small baby, but the baby's father does not do any job and he looks after the baby. From this, we can conclude men are also equally suited for task, which is thought to be done only by women.
Lastly, as we know, that mountain climbing, one of the difficult tasks: we can see can be done by both genders, as well as, nowadays, in military forces, many women are also contributing equally like that of men, so how can it be said that they are not capable of doing same tasks, due inherent to physical differences. Therefore, I would like to say that, though they have differences, they can perform the same task equally.
To sum up, in a conclusion, as from aforementioned scenario, we can conclude that, although men and women have physical differences, they both are equally suited for many tasks. However, some may argue that it is not true by saying that some work which require more strength, can only be done by men: but I disagree with this, as I have mention above women can also do the task which require power like military work, and mountain climbing but if they have some disabilities from birth like vision defect, it is different case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheels'.
Suggestion: wheels
...in this category. Men and women are two wheel of the society- without one our society...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...we can see can be done by both genders, as well as, nowadays, in military forces, many wom...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2621.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 570.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59824561404 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48079170536 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.410526315789 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 845.1 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.38483146067 342% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4017012745 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.136363636 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13636363636 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341335905626 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131511184746 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126085891954 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231605388495 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105167216173 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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