People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solution can you suggest?
It is true that people tend to feel hesitant to change their lives. While this results in some issues, I think that practical steps can help individuals address them.
If decisions to change are limited, people can be faced with various problems in their lives. One of them is that those citizens struggle with community integration. As the old knowledge and skills are no longer appropriate and useful in modern life, people have to learn new things or miss out on new opportunities. For instance, inhabitants who are unable to use the Internet may have difficulty accessing a variety of news sources nowadays. Another problem is that this might lead to generational gaps in their family and their workplace. It is a challenge for people who resist making changes to understand others having distinct thinking. For example, they are unlikely to accept the young people's ventures in their jobs and investments. As a result, they might have problems interacting with them, causing arguments among them.
Nevertheless, there are many measures to cope with the issues. Firstly, courses related to new knowledge and skills should be encouraged for individuals to expand their comprehension and relationships. When attending these classes, people have opportunities to enrich their understanding and take advantage of new things to develop themselves, such as online platforms and media. Furthermore, it is necessary to learn how to become tolerant of others' differences. By sharing experiences and stories, people will be open-minded. Simultaneously, it also helps them learn new views about attitudes and behavior from others.
In conclusion, there is no denying that making changes in our lives is limited. Despite suffering from negative things, people can deal with them with many solutions.
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- In some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives What kind of problems can this cause What solution can you suggest 61
- Summarize
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34275618375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9529517579 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1867132083 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219556702742 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691169472489 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645201816989 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142971674697 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559483147617 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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