Video records are a better way to learn about the way other people in thee world live rather tha written documents TO what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e source of information compared to what we may see in a video. Due to the cost a...
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Line 1, column 565, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... time that it takes to produce, publish an print a book, the content is often we r...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... internet these days. In conclusion, i do not agree that video is a better way...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... othrer people in the world live though i do believe that it is an effective lear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81879194631 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80525673324 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8913355664 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235051497618 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105741561853 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120240303801 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237158567982 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124691619155 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.